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Hidan by Feartakyuubi Hidan by Feartakyuubi
Did another commission. This time a character named Hidan from Naruto. Sort of strange drawing it because once upon a time I was a huge nerd and liked anime. Hm.

Wanting critique on the drawing style and the shading. Don't take the background into account.
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:iconvanessa-maria:
As a friend and watcher, I see the major improvements you've made since we've met.
You have become more aware of facial structure and proportions , and it shows!
You may want to look at the shading again, though. it almost looks like the face is flat, and I know you understand how cool colors and darks push things back, and I can see you doing that, but I think the shadows should be more intense in some areas like under the neck, the hollows of the cheeks and the nose.
I absolutely love the eyes. The deep brows really set it off for me.
I do think you should pay a little more attention to symmetry, though. For a straight, head on shot, the jaw line looks a bit off.
And what do you mean, "ignore the background?"
I think you chose colors that set off the cool undertones in the skin tone you chose. The interesting texture really softens the hard lines in the face.
What do you think?
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Kurai101 Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it! :D make sure you look at my gallery!
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Feartakyuubi Jun 2, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks, but please don't advertise on my drawings like that.
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Kurai101 Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eh sorry
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Feartakyuubi Jun 3, 2012  Student General Artist
It's fine. Just not again. (:
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